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Written by homelessinabbot...

It was not unexpected for me in the course of this week to today, Friday August 10, 2007, be given a letter from the Salvation Army serving notice to move from residence at the Salvation Army.

My biggest worry about moving on is that at my car is not running well. So if you know someone would could donate their time to get my VW running at least semi-well and passing Air Care or has a station wagon or van (I am not a small person) for sale cheap .... send me an email at homelessinabbotsford@hotmail.com.

Better yet if you know someone who has a place in Abbotsford to rent out at a low rental price OR someone who has an employment need for a literate, computer friendly ex-accountant with a passion for bringing about social change. Send them my way or my email address.

 

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The last segment is

Written by Jhonson

The last segment is especially nice, not because it's anything spectacular, as it's not, but because viewers are so emotionally charged by then that the sentimental lines delivered are more than enough to bring on a fresh wave of tears. The downfall of the last scene lies unfortunately in the last few seconds. As viewers are left crying pitifully with the power of pent up emotions, the effect of the scene is killed instantly by a brief inscription that flashes across the screen that reads to the effect of “the future lies in the hands of the children.” Although the intention was probably to leave an inspirational message to heighten the grandiose image of a child's hands reaching upwards across a shot of Earth in the background, the end result is so lame that any attempt at being deep is shattered. Not only does the inscription lead some viewers to inadvertently pull back and stare at the screen in absurd horror, it might lead some to burst out in a merry peal of laughter at the absurdity of the situation.
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